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Installment 13

Reading the room

Ask what each kind of listener needs from this text, and preach to the whole room.

Editorial draft for review. “From the guide” sections are Parker's words; “Working it out,” examples and worksheets are editorial.

Guide sections: Reading the Room

Read

Read “From the guide” first, out loud if you can. Then read “Working it out.”

From the guide

Preach to:

  • the skeptic
  • the new believer
  • the hurting
  • the mature
  • the distracted

Before Sunday ask:

What does each person need from this text?

Don’t just preach to the front row.

Working it out

Put a face on each one. Think of a real person you know for each of the five. It is easier to answer “What does she need from this text?” than “What do skeptics need?”

The front row. The front row is the people who already agree with you and nod along. A sermon written only for them leaves the other four behind.

Small changes do it. Usually the answer is a sentence: define a church word for the new believer, name the skeptic's objection, acknowledge pain before you apply, give the mature something to chew on, change something for the distracted.

Change the delivery, not the meaning (editorial addition). Serving each listener never means softening what the passage says.

Worked example (fictional, process only)

A preacher wrote one name beside each of the five listeners. For the new believer he found two unexplained church words and defined them. For the hurting he added one sentence of acknowledgment before an application. For the skeptic he used “Some of you are thinking…” and named the objection. The big idea did not change.

Discuss

  1. Who is your front row, and how much of this sermon is written for them?
  2. What does the skeptic need from this text? The new believer?
  3. What does someone who is hurting need from it?
  4. What does a mature believer need beyond the basics?

Mentor: name which of the five you tend to forget.

Practice

Write a real person's initials beside each of the five listeners. Answer Parker's question for each. For each listener, make one warranted change or write why no change is needed; one change may serve several listeners.

Worksheet

Copy onto paper or download below; nothing is saved here.

The skeptic — what they need from this text / my change, or why none is needed
The new believer — what they need from this text / my change, or why none is needed
The hurting — what they need from this text / my change, or why none is needed
The mature — what they need from this text / my change, or why none is needed
The distracted — what they need from this text / my change, or why none is needed
Passage meaning unchanged?

Review

Artifact: Listener notes with a warranted change, or a reason no change is needed, for each listener.

Complete when: Parker's question is answered for all five, each listener has one warranted change or a reason no change is needed, and the meaning of the passage is intact.

  • All five listeners considered with a real person in mind.
  • Each listener has one warranted change or a reason no change is needed.
  • The sermon speaks beyond the front row.
  • Passage meaning unchanged.

Mentor feedback

Bring the work you made, not just your answers. Show one place where the passage shaped a decision. Name one strength, choose one useful improvement, and check the revision together.

  1. Name one real strength in the work.
  2. Name one priority improvement, based on evidence in the work.
  3. Revise, then recheck against the review list.